What do we have here?

G’day peeps,

This blog post will be highlighting my comments on three different Digital Artefact pitches. Throughout this process, I have given feedback that will both help and motivate my fellow students to seek further resources and research further into their own Digital Artefacts. Let’s get into it!

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Comment 1: Alana Smith

Alana’s idea was an interesting one and one that I had never even thought about but it was very encouraging to see that Alana was focusing on a topic that she seems quite passionate about and that is honestly a great sign. In order to help Alana’s already packed list of resources, I provided a link to a website that talked about the impact of COVID-19 on the healthcare system in Australia and I believed it could help bring more focus to issues surrounding our country at the moment.

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Comment 2: Josh Sorensen

Josh’s DA idea is very cool and it caught my eye straight away. I love creative stories and I tend to write little bits and pieces in my spare time so I could relate to this DA a lot more compared to Alana’s. I gave my opinion on what Josh should name his podcast mini-series and I tried to relate it to how his characters use HAM radio in order to communicate across the globe. I then proceeded to offer a few suggestions on some different movies that could help Josh add more detail to his mini-series. Both titles are great films in my opinion and place emphasis on the idea that there are less people around.

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Comment 3: Saxon Phillips

I liked Saxon’s initial idea, I understood where he was coming from and the fact that he is basing it on music, I instantly gained interest in his Digital Artefact. Being able to incorporate different genres and different artists into Saxon’s DA brings versatility and a broader range to his project. I mentioned how focusing on the tragic passings on Mac Miller and XXXTentacion could influence his project in a positive way and place emphasis on the future of music and the direction that producers are taking with different music. I then proceeded to link an article that explains the impact that COVID-19 has on the music industry. Overall, I really like the direction Saxon is heading towards.

In terms of the comments that I receive, I will take into account the different resources and feedback provided and will seek more advice from my peers relating to how I can link certain aspects together to create a more cohesive project. Taking on both good and bad feedback will help my project in the broad scheme of things.


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